January 25th 2014
My name is Doran A Bryan, born and raised Worcester Ma. After living 24 years of life I've learned to overcome many obstacles life passes my way. Not only living for myself, but for my daughter. Simple minded, wheres to not letting the every day battle get in the way of living a better life. Not letting life live me, but living life for me.
Coast guard, and carpentry.. the fundamentals of my background. Enjoying walks of life, and seeing where every day by day takes me. Being around friends, and the people that I love completes my day. What does one do with out loved ones? What would you do? Also gaining independence by enjoying quality time with my mind. Fictionally figuring out who I am inside.
John, a past co worker of mine would say i'm spontaneous. Agreeing with him, I consider myself to be an easy going kind of man. Rather doing as come. not doing whats planned. Some might say I am open minded, I don't stick to the obvious; I work around it. Living by doing, not seeing.
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I challenge myself
Truth be told I love myself 
Remember the challenges before thyself 
Understand the world before myself
Studious
Timid
Mindful
You must adore yourself 
Sensible
Elaborate 
Luxuriant
Focused on the life before myself 
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Doran,
ReplyDeleteWelcome to the course. Good first post. I like your style of writing. It's got a good flow. For this course, we don't need to always be grammatically correct. I'd rather you be free flowing and creative.
But I do suggest that you write more. Expand. Let it go. Fill each paragraph and let each paragraph run with ideas and imagination.
In a nutshell: write more.
Your blog design and is great and like the images that you chose. I think you're going to do well in this course.
Write a lot. Go for the A.
GR: 90